Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia
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Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia
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04-21-2008, 12:03 AM
My comments are pretty much the same as tamtam's. I also felt like I'd jumped into the middle of the story. There seemed a lot of character names introduced very quickly.
On the other hand, the atmosphere and dialogue worked well. I would love to read more as you do your rewrites. |
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Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Epigraph - 03-24-2008, 02:16 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by tamtam - 03-27-2008, 09:38 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Epigraph - 03-30-2008, 10:15 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Desdemona - 04-21-2008, 12:03 AM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by GothicRomance - 02-20-2009, 04:11 PM
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