06-09-2009, 09:03 AM
Thank you for your comment Miss Devereaux, and yes, I am looking for critiques.
This is indeed incomplete, and the latter gothic elements come later. And I do know the difference between Goth literature and Goth sub-culture. I am currently working on the rest of the story. And please excuse me for the spelling and grammar. English is not my home langauge.
Again, thank you for the comment and your advice,
Salaam,
-Zerachiel de Mark-
This is indeed incomplete, and the latter gothic elements come later. And I do know the difference between Goth literature and Goth sub-culture. I am currently working on the rest of the story. And please excuse me for the spelling and grammar. English is not my home langauge.
Again, thank you for the comment and your advice,
Salaam,
-Zerachiel de Mark-